The other day,
The other day I was striving in my quickwrite, and was hoping that it was good enough for the teacher. In fact, I was even hoping that the teacher would like the maori sentence I put in.
My topic,or in other words ss(story starter)was Toby new this was a bad idea. Yes ,maybe it was a little edgy but I like it. But I've also got a pointer, My next sentence was picking up the phone and answering it, But If he knew it was a bad idea ,why did he do it. He must have some common sense.
Well,I must say the rest of my story apart from that little detail was fine, So I guess that means I achieved my goal. The teacher read my story starter and and said it was so good she read it to the whole class,Also Kyla-Rose and I got the maori certificate for the week so this has been the best day ever.
