The other day,
The other day I was striving in my quickwrite, and was hoping that it was good enough for the teacher. In fact, I was even hoping that the teacher would like the maori sentence I put in.
My topic,or in other words ss(story starter)was Toby new this was a bad idea. Yes ,maybe it was a little edgy but I like it. But I've also got a pointer, My next sentence was picking up the phone and answering it, But If he knew it was a bad idea ,why did he do it. He must have some common sense.
Well,I must say the rest of my story apart from that little detail was fine, So I guess that means I achieved my goal. The teacher read my story starter and and said it was so good she read it to the whole class,Also Kyla-Rose and I got the maori certificate for the week so this has been the best day ever.
Aloha, Bridie
ReplyDeleteThis blog post reminds me of when we found out we were going to be sharing our writing with the class. This blog post is soooooo good I have nothing bad to say about it. Here I go with a question, do you remember what order Koka Rozie read our story starter out in.
Hi Kyla-Rose