Tuesday, 31 August 2021
Learning from home
Monday, 16 August 2021
Story starters
IN THE DEEP DARK WOOD
This is a poem about the deepest, darkest, spookiest wood that ever lived.Well,It's not exactly spooky but it is about a boy who dared to go in and adventure the Deep,dark wood.
The deepest darkest wood
In the Deep,Dark,Spooky Wood,
There was a rustle in the trees,
The grass had started to sway,
I wondered what the noise was,
That I heard yesterday.
Well that's it I guess, I hope this inspired you to write fascinating poems like I do.Give me feedback in a blog comment or just a thumbs up.
Tune in next time for another fascinating story.
Tuesday, 10 August 2021
The other day,
The other day,
The other day I was striving in my quickwrite, and was hoping that it was good enough for the teacher. In fact, I was even hoping that the teacher would like the maori sentence I put in.
My topic,or in other words ss(story starter)was Toby new this was a bad idea. Yes ,maybe it was a little edgy but I like it. But I've also got a pointer, My next sentence was picking up the phone and answering it, But If he knew it was a bad idea ,why did he do it. He must have some common sense.
Well,I must say the rest of my story apart from that little detail was fine, So I guess that means I achieved my goal. The teacher read my story starter and and said it was so good she read it to the whole class,Also Kyla-Rose and I got the maori certificate for the week so this has been the best day ever.
Friday, 30 July 2021
writing workshop
My writing workshop
Today we had writing and we were learning about were commas should go. The teacher gave us a sheet that had sentences on it. At first I didn't know what it was for but then she started to explain . I could tell other people didn't know what it was for either but within seconds everyone was furiously working away.
Within seconds I had gotten the hang of it and was working away like mad.I had finally finished and only a few other people had finished. Woohoo! I had started after but had actually finished before some people.
Anyway I'll give you two examples of were a comma should go.
Spot the difference,
- The television despite being only a week old exploded.
The Olympics
The Olympics
I don't know bout you, but lately I've been watching the Olympics on T.V And So far it is Incredible. I am cheering for NZ and my favorite athlete ELLA WILLIAMS. She is amazing and you will hear a bit more about her in the next paragraph.
Ella williams:
Ella williams is a surfer. She was born on the 13 of january 1995 .She is 26 and her hometown is or was Whangamata. Her first ever Olympics was in 2020/2021. Her achievement was to be world champion surfer.
Mascots
The mascots Of the olympics are Miratowa and Someity . Someity is the one that is mascot for the paralympics , Miratowa is the mascot that represents the opposite to the paralympics . Together they make a great team.
The olympics is an event that only happens every four years. So, make sure every time the event comes round you turn on the t.v and watch the Olympics. Cheer for whatever country you live in and Most of all, try you hardest to be the one of the people in the Olympics.
