writing workshop

 My writing workshop

Today we had writing and we were learning about were commas should go.   The teacher gave us a sheet that had sentences on it.  At first I didn't know  what it was for but  then  she started to explain .   I could tell other people didn't know what it was for either but within seconds everyone was furiously working away. 

Within seconds I had gotten the hang of it and was working away like mad.I had finally finished and only a few other people had finished.  Woohoo!  I had started after but had actually finished before some people.

Anyway I'll give you two examples of were a comma should go.

Spot the difference,

1. The television despite being only a week old exploded.                                              

2. The television , despite only being a week old exploded.                                                                                                        

The Olympics

The Olympics

 I don't know bout you, but lately I've been watching the Olympics on T.V  And  So far it is Incredible.   I am cheering for NZ and my favorite athlete ELLA WILLIAMS.  She is amazing and you will hear a bit more about her in the next paragraph.

Ella williams:

Ella williams is a surfer.  She was born on the 13 of january 1995 .She is 26 and her hometown is or was Whangamata.  Her first ever Olympics was in 2020/2021.  Her achievement was to be world champion surfer.

Mascots

The mascots Of the olympics are Miratowa and Someity .  Someity is the one that is mascot for the paralympics , Miratowa is the mascot that represents the opposite to the paralympics .  Together they make a great team.

The olympics is an event that only happens every four years. So, make sure every time the event comes round you turn on the t.v and watch the  Olympics.  Cheer for whatever country you live in and Most of all, try you hardest to be the one of the people in the   Olympics.